Unfortuatly I missed the actual sunset, as I didn't get the camera in time so had to settle with the sundown option, thought about a travel subject so have made any changes other than a tweek to the levels and saturation and deliberatly knocking back the shadows to keep that night time look to the image, I quite like that there was three musicians in a sort of triangle composition. There was a bright light to the right of them which ive toned down a touch on the keyboard players back but not sure if it would benefit from a crop to just including the drummer and the bass player,
Be interesting to know your thoughts
Cheers
Rob
I do like this dramatic shot - I expect it would make a good album cover for the band. Very nice setting and I think that leaving it a bit late may make it more dramatic. My opinion is keep the keyboard player in as he is part of the story - and the fact that he's brighter maybe adds to it as I'm wondering whether it means he is the band leader? Could maybe do with a tiny sliver cropped off both sides? Nice capture.
I like this image and for me the keyboard player has to stay. As the light is coming from the right would brightening the faces of the other two help with balance. Just a very little but the light is falling on their faces. LHS water is also a little bright. Love the idea and composition.
David
A very interesting and different shot. It is best with all of the trio but it could possibly have a ittle trimmed of the bottom. Well seen and captured.
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Unfortuatly I missed the actual sunset, as I didn't get the camera in time so had to settle with the sundown option, thought about a travel subject so have made any changes other than a tweek to the levels and saturation and deliberatly knocking back the shadows to keep that night time look to the image, I quite like that there was three musicians in a sort of triangle composition. There was a bright light to the right of them which ive toned down a touch on the keyboard players back but not sure if it would benefit from a crop to just including the drummer and the bass player,
Be interesting to know your thoughts
Cheers
Rob
I do like this dramatic shot - I expect it would make a good album cover for the band. Very nice setting and I think that leaving it a bit late may make it more dramatic. My opinion is keep the keyboard player in as he is part of the story - and the fact that he's brighter maybe adds to it as I'm wondering whether it means he is the band leader? Could maybe do with a tiny sliver cropped off both sides? Nice capture.
I like this image and for me the keyboard player has to stay. As the light is coming from the right would brightening the faces of the other two help with balance. Just a very little but the light is falling on their faces. LHS water is also a little bright. Love the idea and composition.
David
A very interesting and different shot. It is best with all of the trio but it could possibly have a ittle trimmed of the bottom. Well seen and captured.