Nicely captured portrait, with good catchlights. For me the highlights on the left side of her forehead (as we look) and just below her eye, are a tiny bit too bright. I woud also crop up from the bottom (and al ittle on the left) so that the amount of skin on both shoulders is about the same, as I think the pattern of her top distracts the eye a bit too much. But a lovely capture nevertheless.
Cheers, Des :-)
Nice portrait but I feel that the model is not very relaxed and the image has a very slight touch of "rabbit caught in a headlight" look to it. This can easily happen at a busy club shoot but some photographers can get the model to relax anyway and thus get a better pose. I did not take any images of the model at the practical night because I thought it all looked a bit pressurised.
Dave
I agree with both your comments - thank you. It was made obvious to us at the time that individual time for taking photographs was going to be limited, and it was as you say Dave, a pressurised situation. I have some other shots from when I did direct the model a bit more, but unfortunately I didn't have time to get the lighting and camera settings as I liked as everyone else needed to have a go before we packed away.
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Nicely captured portrait, with good catchlights. For me the highlights on the left side of her forehead (as we look) and just below her eye, are a tiny bit too bright. I woud also crop up from the bottom (and al ittle on the left) so that the amount of skin on both shoulders is about the same, as I think the pattern of her top distracts the eye a bit too much.
But a lovely capture nevertheless.
Cheers, Des :-)
Nice portrait but I feel that the model is not very relaxed and the image has a very slight touch of "rabbit caught in a headlight" look to it. This can easily happen at a busy club shoot but some photographers can get the model to relax anyway and thus get a better pose. I did not take any images of the model at the practical night because I thought it all looked a bit pressurised.
Dave
I agree with both your comments - thank you. It was made obvious to us at the time that individual time for taking photographs was going to be limited, and it was as you say Dave, a pressurised situation. I have some other shots from when I did direct the model a bit more, but unfortunately I didn't have time to get the lighting and camera settings as I liked as everyone else needed to have a go before we packed away.